My goal this week in writing is 23/06/17

  My goal this week in writing is L.P.G 9 I can write in different ways for different purposes recount, describe,explain narrate, argue.
I used this when I did some creative writing about a Giraffe climbing a tree.  Here is my writing and the giraffe we wrote about.

 The giraffe Said to himself "I thought  climbing this tree was a good idea" until  I started to slip down,down, down  what is it the tee or was it me? I saw an angry hippo underneath me, and I clinged on tighter than I heard a crack in the tree started to tilt,I was scared I would be hippos lunch.  The tree started to fall, I  heard the hippo moving around in the bush, my hands were sweeting, I was going to slip.  The hippo kepted moving and I heard the rustling of leaves, what was the hippo doing?  I woke suddenly the hippo by my side, I must have hit my head, I felt leaves underneath me that whole time the hippo was trying to save me.  When the hippo saw me awake he said "are you okay"
"Yes" I replied, thanked him and left.