My goal in writing this week

My goal in writing this week is L.P.G 4 "I can reread my work many times to make sure it makes sense and meets its purpose."

I used this when we did some creative writing about a photo, I had to reread my work to make sure it made sense.
 The fish had one wish. His wish was to fly, fly into the sky. So we found another bowl and gave it a go. He tried and tried but  could not fly. Then came the cat, she had just eaten a rat, she told the fish, fish can't fly so off the can't went. The fish read a book on fish trying to prove the cat wrong.  He came across a page on flying fish so he called the cat and said "you are wrong there are fish that can fly" and he showed her the book and she said "oh"