My goal this week in writing

My goal this week in writing is L.P.G 12 I can proofread my work to correct spelling and punctuation
I used this when I did some persuasive writing.  I wrote mine about having a free-day Friday in our class.  Here is my writing.

Pod five should a free day Friday once a week

I believe that pod 5 should a free day Friday once a week.  Here are my reasons why.  Firstly we have some time to think about what we achieved during the week and what we want to achieve the. Next week.  Also we can spend some time with friends because some of us only see our friend at school.  We could also do rotations so we can do even more different activities.

Secondly we could have a free choice learning day.  Instead of it being normal free choice we could have a free choice learning day instead.  There are lots of things we can do instead of playing on devices we could do reading, writing or maths.  Also it would be fun. For us to plan our own day making sure we do some reading, writing  and maths, also we can choose what we do for reading writing and maths.

Lastly lots of people love senior sports and a free day would we a good day to do it.  We could move assemblies to the morning.  That's why I think pod 5 should have a free day Friday.

By Mikayla