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Thursday, 27 July 2017

My goal this week in writing is

My goal this week in writing is L.P.G 19 I can use similes, personification or alliteration when appropriate to enhance meaning and interest.  I used this when I did some writing about a photo.  Here is my writing.

2 comments:

  1. T: I like your writing how you despribed the story.
    A: What was the photo about.
    G: Maybe next time you could show us the photo.

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  2. T: I like your writing how you despribed the story.
    A: What was the photo about.
    G: Maybe next time you could show us the photo.

    ReplyDelete