My goal this week in writing

My goal in writing this week LPG 26 "I can publish using a variety of media depending on on the audience and purpose." 

I practiced this when our class published our writing on the computers. 

This is my writing:

Do you remember the legend of Lake Ora?

Sure you do 

Remember the first night, the splashing and crashing of the taniwha.  Remember the brave warrior who wanted to show everyone he wasn’t scared of anything.  Remember.  How he went down to the lake thinking it was a taniwha.  Remember how he peered into the lake and saw the taniwha. Remember exactly a year later on another full moon the taniwha returned.  Remember the cry of the chiefs daughter “aaahhh” she screamed.  Remember how the same brave worrier ran to the lake with his biggest spare.  Remember how he didn't return for two days and on the second he returned with a piece of the taniwha pas flesh on his spare.  Remember how the poor girl was never seen again.